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©2009-2010 =DeathlyMoonGoddess
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This is one of my new rp charas, her name is [if it's not obvious] Selena. Which, iirc, is 'Moon Goddess' 8DD lol

She's a fairy/ siren. Her nick is Cici, or Sena ^^
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[just extra stuff, just in case ya can't see it from the chity scan ^^]

Eye color- Green
Hair color- Faded black
Those are NOT tattoos, they are birthmarks.
She's only about 12inches [a foot] tall.
she uses mixed magic [alot of dark magic.. some white magic (dark = fighting spells, white= healing types of spells)]

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:icongehiroyuki01:
The overall design is nice~
I like the movement you put into this, like the hand motion is awesome~

I must say though, you have some things a bit off.
Her ear is a bit low, usually the ear is the span between the nose and the top of the eye.
I think her nose it up too far up and away from her upper lip.
The arm that is farther away seems too long.
Since you seem to have the chest tilted at an angle, I suggest you move the hand up to where the fingers will be level with the frontal palm or somewhere close around there.
Also, your frontal leg shape looks a bit deformed.
It looks good until you reach the knee where there seems to a be a dent of some sort when it should be smooth.
The frontal foot also seems to be flipped; it looks like her big toe instead of her pinky and I think you should show more underside of the foot so it doesn't look so awkward.

Really, the character design is well thought~ :D
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pretty~~

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Very awesome! I personally love the pose!

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Thank you very much ^^

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:D You're quite welcome my dear

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